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Re: At The Tongue of The Critic
Can I hear an amen and amen? But you must celebrate the ravishing and the ravaging of the critic, a hallow's eve of the soul. No? I really like this, ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: bridging
Image in theory, the sense of, the story-like setting present in pure poetry, a slow paced stacatto introduction: sun-sunk, flippant feather story, like an aim, north spurred bronco history, home-turf
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Eleven:Eleven
This is frankly charming. Give yourself a pat for some original work, hun. Well done! It's funny tho how the weakest part of the piece is going to be the ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: I, between memories and dust
Time/creation versus God? God is outside of time but the world is not? There is so much here it really provokes some odd questions. I believe it may be the ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
First off, I commend you for writing and reading personal work at the funeral of someone you knew. I have only ever publicly read something someone else had written (also ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: on the displacement of freshwater flowers
Horrible ending, black bird? "Listen: i just don’t want to cry anymore." A person can only say so much, what do we all hear when we really listen, and how ...
Aug 1, 2011
