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TheLostMandore

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: At The Tongue of The Critic

    Can I hear an amen and amen? But you must celebrate the ravishing and the ravaging of the critic, a hallow's eve of the soul. No? I really like this, ...

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: bridging

    Image in theory, the sense of, the story-like setting present in pure poetry, a slow paced stacatto introduction: sun-sunk, flippant feather story, like an aim, north spurred bronco history, home-turf

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Eleven:Eleven

    This is frankly charming. Give yourself a pat for some original work, hun. Well done! It's funny tho how the weakest part of the piece is going to be the ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I, between memories and dust

    Time/creation versus God? God is outside of time but the world is not? There is so much here it really provokes some odd questions. I believe it may be the ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Goodbye

    First off, I commend you for writing and reading personal work at the funeral of someone you knew. I have only ever publicly read something someone else had written (also ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: on the displacement of freshwater flowers

    Horrible ending, black bird? "Listen: i just don’t want to cry anymore." A person can only say so much, what do we all hear when we really listen, and how ...

    Aug 1, 2011


flamin hot cool ranch doritos say a lot about the duality of man
— dissonance