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Re: Material Limbo
Material There are scavenger birds in my head - scorn hovering above the water and white skies I cannot circumvent the obvious - the obvious, that bastion which eludes me ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Professor Morgenstern
This is a short one, but I think this deserves all the good mojo. Congrats. =) -M.
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: At The Tongue of The Critic
Can I hear an amen and amen? But you must celebrate the ravishing and the ravaging of the critic, a hallow's eve of the soul. No? I really like this, ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Chemical
music, because: For my bird: you never belonged in a cage. find your freedom somehow.
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: bridging
Image in theory, the sense of, the story-like setting present in pure poetry, a slow paced stacatto introduction: sun-sunk, flippant feather story, like an aim, north spurred bronco history, home-turf
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Chemical
-has a weak ending -the italicized personal pronouns are theoretical, obviously sketch tiny fragments of bamboo brass halo rock organ travesty oh, bade enter sundipped skin whispering unions in the ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Eleven:Eleven
This is frankly charming. Give yourself a pat for some original work, hun. Well done! It's funny tho how the weakest part of the piece is going to be the ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: I, between memories and dust
Time/creation versus God? God is outside of time but the world is not? There is so much here it really provokes some odd questions. I believe it may be the ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
First off, I commend you for writing and reading personal work at the funeral of someone you knew. I have only ever publicly read something someone else had written (also ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Mouth (Black and White/Macro)
That's fantastic, actually.
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: on the displacement of freshwater flowers
Horrible ending, black bird? "Listen: i just don’t want to cry anymore." A person can only say so much, what do we all hear when we really listen, and how ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Mandorelute
Uh oh, Misery loves company for breakfast .
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
I don't have the passwords, email, or email pass words no more.... So I'm reborn. yup. -M. aka
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Mandorelute
I had a previous persona here but at a critical time in my life I nearly stopped writing entirely and just about completely forsook the internet. Not one of my ...
Jul 31, 2011
