TheJennaRaiton

Nice work. I enjoyed this. Short and sweet, my favorite kind of poetry.Your message was clearly delivered. Did you have a specific rhyme scheme, or did choice words just go ...

Hello. My name is Jenna. I’m a new member of YWS as of October 13, 2010. Let me tell you all a little about myself. I am fifteen years old, ...

ok, I know the rhyme scheme is messed up but I like it this way. It gives it a twist. I think this is about becoming a teenager, but truly, ...

Poems that spell out a girl’s name are a very romantic thing to do, but it's also very difficult. Congratulations of achieve such a work! I hope you’re planning on ...

I think silent1 is wrong, new members deserve to have their works reviewed too! I'll start with the good. Your diction and word flow were excellent, your stanza breaks were ...

He’s turned me into a typical girl. They said I’m a typical girl now. I used to like jazz, and I used to love poetry. I enjoyed mini-vans, and I ...