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Re: The Norm
Now if someone knew a narative poem when they saw it, this would be it! The speaker of the poem is real.
Oct 23, 2010 -
Re: Purple
This is a quick poem that just waltzed into my head :) hope you like it Purple What is purple? Questions are always interesting The color purple means : Sunset, ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: I Blush
“While it’s alright to hold on tight, please don’t try to hold on. " - First Sight , These United States There is the living. He who loves me, he ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Birds On a Wire
I love Regina Spektor, and I love the song this poem was inspired by!
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Happy Death
This is gruesome. But in a good way. The speaker of the poem has a strong hate for someone, obviously. I wish there was more. Why do you hate this ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Knock you down
Haha, cool rap, maybe you want to put it in "rap format". Ya know, raps are poems!
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Whimsy
A stolid blue pencil is running quickly. Running on paper? The angry green pen pursues ... What. How does a pen pursue? Stange personification. the pencil through the tall trees ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: A Monster
Buried deep under your skin A monster waits, hidden within Interesting... Sharpened claws, filled with spite The monster sits at the dead of night Ha, whaaaat? I got the feel ...
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Re: Neverland
Hm, I'm sure this looks better in person. I wish it was larger so I could view it more clear.
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Face Cup
This made me giggle. I like the ears on it. Reminds me of a monkey, or even a homo erectus. I also love the expressionless eyes. Makes it enjoyable to ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Fall Homonym Poetry
There’s something about weather , whether it changes your mood or not. The wind blows trees from here to there , their leaves left to rot. I pull out the ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: (If only you were) Mine
I want you to understand I want you to touch my hand with your hand. I want your love and know that I'll be your man. AAA pattern? I like ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Semi Biography of the Moment
Yes, Canni I am doing reviews as well as posting my works! :) I've noticed that we have the exact same ammount of reviews, so good job. Thank you for ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: The Five Worlds
I. LOVED. THIS. I can't even write a review on it, because ... well, it wouldn't be a review it'd just be poetic praise. I loved the rhyme scheme, the ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Who are you?
She stands there in the corner: She weeps; This is a good start! It really grabbed my attention. I hold in my hand, I don't think there needs to be ...
Oct 14, 2010
