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"Nice trick but--" I began but was cut off by the woman making a move. Her movements slowed slightly as my time slow ability activated. It made no difference. Even ...

I debated to just let the matter go. I mean, by just looking at the newcomer, I could tell that she was definitely not someone to mess with. But, of ...

Okay, this is a play that I have been working on for 2 years and was finally completed in time for a Writer's Craft assignment. My teacher and theatre company ...

Though I obviously don't get the sobe joke, I don't mind that it's in there. It doesn't seem out of place to me at all. As for the entire chapter, ...

He's a man. And don't worry, if you don't know, then maybe others won't either. Maybe it's my fault and I didn't make it clear enough. I'll go through the ...

This is the third chapter in the War of 2201 short story series! While the first 2 start the series off with a bang (literally) this one slows it down ...

"Maybe you're right. But we'll never know. What's done is done. I'm still alive and in business, so I guess it's not all bad."

Okay, I see a lot of comments about a Percy Jackson feel and I don't disagree, but I get the feeling that it may only be an inspiration and the ...

"It was," I said lost in the memory, "right up until we got betrayed by one of our own and were forced to fight for our lives against a terrorist ...

I finished my coffee and ordered another. "Lost souls," I said while staring forward, "I haven't survived this long just to be a 'lost soul'" After getting my coffee, I ...

Okay, again great job on this one! I thouroughly enjoyed the entire thing. That being said, the spacing in between lines for the first, I don't know, paragraph (?) was ...

Hey there, let me start off by saying that the story is very interesting to read and I feel like the characters are believable which is the main thing I ...

Okay, sweet! And thanks for the welcome! Also, I kind of figured that I would be trapped from the initial description and from what I have read so far and ...

Ummm. Wow. This story is impossible to really review using conventional methods. There are words that don't exist, unrealistic dialogue and the story jumps like crazy with no reason for ...

Hey, I know it's started, but it sounds like fun! If you are not accepting at this point, you may disregard this post. I think I'll try a light spirit. ...