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Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Ivan Istor I stood dazed at Acacia's request. She was asking for an alliance when she could have easily killed me. She really wasn't giving me much of a choice, ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Willow Creek 1.1
This was really good and well written. There was one small thing that I noticed that looked a little awkward though: Emma adds, whacking me on the butt. My skirt ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Body
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Ivan Istor My running slowed more as the water rose to my knees. I was nearing the building, but my progress was slow and the rising water was making it ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: The Lamirghetta (started)
Sounds like fun! I'm in! Name: Demorian Gender (if you're male, you're a sorcerer, female, you're a sorceress): Male. Sorcerer Age (in the hundreds, though they resemble youths): 221 looks ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Leon Echelon Leon. I was at home, under the covers of my bed. That was my mother's voice. The games are over, and I had somehow survived and made it ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Ivan Istor I barely had time to react before the girl cut both my arm and my leg with her dagger and bolted. There was something in her eyes that ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
*Junglelover, that was Andi that was killed, right? If so, that's fine it just makes it easier for me to not have to think about her.* Ivan Istor I stood, ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games DT
Yeah, sounds good. :smt003
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games DT
It will be just Ivan. Depending on how things go, Leon may become a part, but at the moment he isn't moving very far. At the moment, Ivan is at ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games DT
Ninja was my ally, so I can take care of her death when the time is right. That means Ivan would be ally-less and Leon too, but he's insane... And ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Ivan Istor We weren't the first ones to arrive at the cornucobia like I thought we would be. As we approached the large round building that housed the cornucobia, someone ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Ivan Istor I was sitting next to Andi who had, despite the cold, managed to get some sleep when the light came back. As soon as the light came on, ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Leon Echelon I must have dozed off a bit during the night, because it seemed that as soon as I close my eyes and opened them again, it was light ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Removed
I loved the story, let's just start with that. It was innovative, which is something I always like to see. There isn't much I can say criticism wise because the ...
Aug 27, 2010
