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Re: Find Out What Grade Level You Write At
I got a grade level of 10 And Readability of 58. I'm happy with that. I also found this pretty funny: legalese can get a score below 10 I've read ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: A Fresh Start
I will start out by saying that I find this a very interesting start to a story. I read the entire series, so I am familiar with all of these ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Amazing Photo of Sun & Moon
You have to be zoomed in pretty far to see it.
May 4, 2011 -
Re: HELLO PEOPLES!!!!
I didn't even realise you were new here! Way to get into the community! Well, we have already met (fellow Bamboozler) but I want to formally welcome you to YWS! ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Rock Talk
Hey there! I remember learning about all the different kinds of rocks and yes I do believe that is how you spell them. I thought it was a clever script ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Demonic Flare Chapter 1: Stuck with a Beast
Hey there! I'm here to do a review for you! OK, first I did enjoy this story. It kept my interest all the way through and I felt it was ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: A name that means traveler: Prologue *edited*
Hey there! I want to start out by saying that this is a good starting point for a story in my opinion. It was descriptive without being overly so (which ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Tell Me It's Okay
Hey there again! Here I am for another review for you! May I say that you are very good with words and are able to write poems very well. It's ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: As Much As I Love You?
Hey there! Let me first say that I'm not a very god poet, but here goes a review anyways! :D Your poem was very emotional and that is something I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Adventures of Captain McAwesome Pants 2
Okay, so first I must mention that this series is a comedy that is pretty much spoofing the entire super hero genre. It is meant to be a comic book, ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
Green lilies. Probably because of the green name! :D
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: The Coward's Way Out
Bearing everything you said about this in mind, I do believe that this would be a good stand alone story. It's one of those things where you don't really need ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: MS Paint - Beach
This looks pretty awesome!! I'm not much of an artist, but to the 'untrained' eye, it looks really good! I also know it would be a pain to draw it ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Charlie Sheen Lost His Marbles?
If he is bipolar (and I do agree with you, Audrey) then all the media attention isn't helping things at all. All it does is fuel him into thinking that ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: The S&M Recon - Request Only
Mai Lin Finding water was a good idea and I thought about all the possible places to find it as I snuck back into the forest. I didn't want to ...
Apr 9, 2011