TheForgottenAuthor

O.o wow...that's all I can say...wow. I honestly would never have guessed. It could be taken as good or bad...depending on where you stand on gay rights...but Dumbledore???...never would have ...

OK, just to start out, I'm not really a big fan of archaic-ness, much. On some its Ok, but on this it just sounded a bit overdone. But there are ...

OK, I am writing a book, and it is called the Tomb of Time. Here is what has happened so far in the story: (I'm skipping a lot of the ...

hhmmm I tried making it "her's" but it says its spelled wrong so I didn't do it like that. But thank you!

She turned to see the look in his eyes Then bowed her head and turned to cry For she knew in her heart he would never be hers Her feelings ...

OK, just for clarification, this is not a "why am I here" type of poem. This poem is a "why has almost everything imaginable happen to me" type poem. the ...

okay, just to put it into clarification, the questions were the point of the poem. Thats kind of why the poem title was a question. My point in putting the ...

why am I here? why can't I move on? Why is everything I need So desperately far away? Why am I sitting here alone by myself wondering why I am ...

hhhmmm I don't know if that is quite what I'm looking for...but I won't lie...it's a great name! :elephant:

this was great, I loved the way you described everything! very nicely done.

I tried a little too hard to rhyme in my opinion...but I think it turned out pretty well. It was supposed to be broad, and not too specific. This poem ...

Thanks guys!

thx for the critiques, guys! for fand, the title was not meant to be "screaming". I just wrote it because I always title my poems/songs in capslock. but anyways, thx ...

you sound angry... And you overused the word "Bitch" too much. try using some other colorful words. but other than that...nice.

TITLE HELP WILL BE MUCH APPRECIATED! I was too blind to even see The suffering going on around me I was too numb I couldn’t feel What is true and ...