TheFallen1

Welcome to YWS!!! I love horror just love it even thought I cannot write it myself :) If you ever need someone to review your work Im always here!!!! Enjoy ...

Wow intresting topics cant wait to read more of your work!!! Good luck and have fun writting!!! :)

Great job!!! I love the story and how you used good description also I was able to create a image in my head of the wonderful story you created!!Keep up ...

Harsh indeed :( but i will take your advice no matter how harsh it was.

Want me to tone down the description part? Is it bad? Sorry im just new at this(sigh) was it too violent?

Thank you i will listen to your advice. Im just new to this thats why but i will try my best. Thank you. :D

Prolouge Im not your average teenage girl, no sir. I live in a church where I'm my pastor's pet. Yes, indeed I am. Legend say's that one day a girl ...