TheEccentricScribe

I think if you had read my prior post a little more carefully, you wouldn't have said anything, simply because you were only reiterating exactly what I had been saying, ...

This is a writing exercise I've been working on for a week or so. I hope you like it. Chapter 1 The gates to the fence were quite impressive, heavy ...

Yes, I agree with everyone's comments on the poem. Let me reiterate what I told Incandescence in a PM: My comment about not caring about replies and suggestions for my ...

I realize this is a serious place for writing and all, but you know, my grandmother did just die Wednesday, so it's not like my top priority is astounding poetics ...

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Prologue: A Wicked Pact A hellish gleam sprung from the pages, as if the unusual paper’s very fabric consisted of some otherworldly power. Of course, the notion was absurd; the ...

This reminded me (in a rather scary way) of the kind of conversation I might have with my father. It also reminds me of the Abbet & Castello "Who's on ...

Here's a little more of the backstory of Afanadar. Rise of the Nether Kings The tale of the Nether Kings tells the very origin of evil, not only in Afanadar ...

I've got a huge timeline set out for the ancient history, but unfortunately very little of it is ready to be pushed into prose. Ages of Afanadar Our world’s history ...

From the first, I was hooked to this little story. I was just glancing over different stuff, not really planning on reading everything through, and this grabbed my curiosity. Really ...

Not terribly innovative at the moment, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. After all, that's why so many people inspired by The Lord of the Rings (or any other ...

To the first reviewer: Thank you for your input. Yes, the gnomes have a very meandering way of speaking, and if it is confusing to you, then I take that ...

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A weakness I have as a writer is trying to get way too much out in the first swing. You do not have that weakness; you keep enough story elements ...

The story was entertaining and imaginative. I suggest adding some commas in dialogue where pauses might seem natural, but that's more a stylistic preference than anything else. Also, it stuck ...