TheEccentricScribe

I like this story! Elena seems interesting. I think the old woman at the end was a nice touch. I really would like to see how this story continues. A ...

A little angry, no? Well, I won't pass judgement on the thoughts expressed, for the simple reason that that's not the purpose of a writer's forum. I can critique your ...

Chapter 2: In Times of War Garius Rabba motioned with one hand for the soldiers following him to stop, as he surveyed the rainforest-elven village before him. A minor village ...

I like what you say in the poem. In some places, even how you say it is neat. But as some have said, you may want to relax on the ...

Crimson Twilight: I appreciate your compliments, your suggestions, and your candor. It is good of you to balance your critiques both with positives and negatives, and I really appreciate the ...

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Thanks to everyone for reviewing The Wizard. It most definitely needs work on the commas. To the reviewer who said it could be turned into a novel, I guess, but ...

I don't agree with the above comment that it's the writer's job entirely when creating effective work. Personally, I think good literature is not the writer dumping his or her ...

It was certainly interesting, lol. Pretty good parody of typical rap, if that's what you intended. And I love chocolate myself, so, you ladies better be willing to share! Funny ...

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Excellent poem, Emeraldi, quite full of feeling, very touching and very convincing. Two things. Imperative just seems like too . . . Eh, formal of a word, though that's not ...

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Appropriate timing for the time of year, of course, and well done. I absolutely love spoofs (I even spoof some of my favorite songs). No suggestions that I can think ...

No thanks. I think the point is made, lol. We're beating a dead horse at this point.