TheDreamDay

Hi. Question: why did you take something this long and turn it into something so brutally short? I can totally see this story as one of those great ones that ...

The first time I met my sister I thought she was too short to be related to me. She didn’t look like me at all, with her red-blond hair and ...

I like the ending. I was kind of expecting the boy to run away or something so I was really surprised. But I didn't really understand what you mean when ...

This was sweet. I liked how there were different stories overlapping each other: the story of the girl loosing her aunt, of the aunt loosing her life, of the uncle ...

I haven’t seen her since that night. She used to sit on the porch all morning and all afternoon, even in the winter, when there were no leaves in the ...

Hey, did you ever post this on some other site? Maybe on Gaia? Cause I'm shure I've read that somewere before... I liked this piece, I loved the cliff-hanger ending. ...

I really liked this! I love you style, and the way the reader is brought inside Davids head when he answeres. Also how his thoughts kind of pop up when ...

You really brought Sara alive for me. You described her feelings well and I could get a pretty good picture of the type of person she was. Something I found ...

The first paragaph was a bit confusing, but after that the story had a nice flow to it. The only part I thought was rather rushed was when she says ...

hey, thanks every one for the wonderfull welcomes! I feel so welcomed (oh yes, I used it twice)!

hey Cuni and welcome! I'm not shure I should be welcoming you thought cause I'm new as well (but that'll just be our secret.shh.). I hope you have a lot ...

Yes, as you probably guessed, I am new! I'm already really excited about this site; I used to have a deviantart account (back in the day when I drew a ...