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inkling huh? I Like that. Well, that was vary descriptive, well written, I could probably not write anything that short and that good, so kudos. It kills me when people ...

That would would sound amazing when it is all arranged, it is hard to tell how it is really supposed to be, not know how fast, the exact style, or ...

Emo!!!!!!!!! Thanks, now I am going to be depressed. Man! But that was awesome, Great Voc., descriptive, I believed it. My only problem. Hope? she didn't seem very hopeful now. ...

Interesting, I am familiar with Pandora's box, I even started a rendition of the story. (vary graphic in my account though) I would like to see how this story turns ...

Nice, I liked it, even the most adult of poets will write a kiddish poem, they are actually quite enjoyable. It was vary good. keep it up.... yo. hehe

Oh, the words that can urupt from a hartbroken mouth. With such flowidity, do the word spread onto the page of anger, regret, or vengace. So has what has been ...

Good, but the poem seems like it was written a little rushed I am sorry, that is just what came to mind. It was good, the only thing I am ...

There were some places where a word was not added to the next line, which kind of threw it off. (Change of topic) Alas! teach me, I have been wanting ...

It is good, but I found it a little hard to follow. It is one of those poems that you have to read fast to make some of it sound ...

Right, the poem must have a deep meaning in it, please, :D. It would be an awsome poem, if it were a little easier to understand. You give this to ...

This is what I wrote for the Tom Howard/John H. Reid Short Story Contest, I should have all mistakes and typos out, but it would help for thoughts and opinions. ...

I might be too late for this to be noticed, but I want to comment on it. I Liked this, it shows really well, felling. I Love the way it ...

I will do a girl thing here. *stunned* Holy Hell, I loved that, that was beyond amazing. I had no clue that anyone would write a poem on the life ...

Yay! I get to comment on it first "Yes!" "The sky was overcast, the night was grey, my vision was hazy." Um, The sky was overcast, the night was gray? ...

I agree with what every one has just said. It was awesome! good job. And they are right, there is nothing I see to really to touch up on. Good ...