TheCodex

Here is a short Civil War story I wrote, in diary entries. I really hope you enjoy, please comment. And, I don't know what's up with the spacing :| September ...

The soft, leafy steam was tender and fragrant. I can just see[i] and taste[/i] the tea here! Imaginary jazz meandered in the space between. Tea and jazz. They mix perfectly ...

The soft, leafy steam was tender and fragrant. I can just see[i] and taste[/i] the tea here! Imaginary jazz meandered in the space between. Tea and jazz. They mix perfectly ...

I had to read it a few times to get the rhyme scheme, but it's good. A little short, but it's to the point. Very nice.

Awesome. I loved how you had all those different things like hair stylists, writers, cults, and homework help. Boy can you find it in Google..... Your poem reads well, it's ...

I feel exactly the same way :D Very good poem, loved the twist ending. I thought it was going to just be another angst poem. Very well done!

I'm a big history fan, and I love this. Civil War history is amazing. Cheers, very good story.

Love it :D I love books too, also, the format of this poem is nice. Nice to have someone else on this site into humorous rhyme poetry :D

Thanks for the critique :) Yes, some of the things are put in for the rhyme, I think that's sort of the point. The notebook did actually have a stamp ...

Very nice :) Thanks very much!

Where I sit By The Codex Books litter the floor The swivel chair is piled high with junk Right beside the door A calendar, old All sorts of clothes to ...

See title. Thanks!

Granted, but now you can't walk or run :( I wish I could run faster than a cheetah :D

Thanks guys, really :smt003 Love the tips.

Granted, but now you trust everyone. I wish I never got a grade below and A.