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Re: September 25th Review Day
Yay! I get to review during a hurricane! No, actually the internet might go down because of the power, so some people on the east coast might not make it. ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: September 25th Review Day
Yay. We can spend the hurricane reviewing :D
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Can I have this deleted please?
Erm, can I please have this deleted? Thanks.
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
Well, that be awesome. What a sweet little ending. It's just a cute, funny little drabble. No concrit, just saying that it's awesome :)
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: So, this NaNoWriMo....
Hello again. I'm thinking of doing this NaNoWriMo in November, and I'm kind of at a loss to how I should even THINK of starting. Is it a good idea ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Mischief Managed: Saying "Until Next Time" To Harry
AWWWW! Now I feel so happy/sad :( :) Anyway, that was very well done. I agree with what you said about Snape! He's this huge jerk in the books, until ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Math...mwahahahah
Great poem subject! I HATE math as well! the only concrit I have is that the poem doesn't really flow as as far as rhyming. Functions and problems, solutions and ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Soaps, ropes, popes.
I lol'd seriously. If it's got the pope in it... it's a funny poem. Nothing like a little funny to get you smiling. Nice work.
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Annoying
I'm just going to take it for what it's worth- a funny, short little drabble. I like it :) Don't you just get so annoyed you just write an angry ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Peach (Edited)
Alright, this poem is alright. I get what you say about a peach being singular, but I don't get why you really rag on peaches. Do you mean to say ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Still Me
This poem is alright, but I really can't garner a meaning from it. Also, replace "ain't" like everyone said. Sorry for such a vague answer, but I really couldn't understand ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Delicious
Ha, this is funny. I loved "Chunky guys flying"- made me lol. North Korean sneeze champions Chosing slippery sliders Saving sickly spiders Hugging frickley pricklies Eating Oreo cookies Those lines ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Life
Hiya! Welcome to YWS, and here's a review from me. Sorry if I sound critical! Life is a steep slope, life is a plain; Life has sunny days, life has ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Spider
This is a very well written poem. Good metaphors, great imagery. My only complaint is that you make a writer sound like a bad guy, the reader like a gullible ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Ducks
Cute poem, I lol'd at the last line. To adress the comment above (Jojo's), I think that's a bit too harsh. The poem's meant to be a joke, that's what ...
Jun 14, 2011
