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I am IN LOVE with this poem. The metaphor is awesome. I also think it's an awfully original idea. Great job! He is the scholar perceived as worthless. He is ...

Hey! Here to review this poem. Like someone above had mentioned, I didn't know what this was at first. The line Can they say, 'I love you, no matter what'? ...

This is pretty good, a true concept to be sure, but some things don't make sense to me. The last four lines seem out of place, and I wouldn't use ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! A few tips I would have for a newbie like yourself... (I was one just at the start of this year) 1. Review, review, review! This ...

I like this :) I like your opening, it's so true! Everyone can relate, no one can deny. Well done there. You have a lot of explanation in the first ...

Erm. Today's The First Day Of School . I Groaned and Go Out Of Bed . I Peeled My Clothes Off and Put On A Grey Plaid Shirt and Shorty ...

A novel, huh? Let us begin. First things first- I would lop off everything before the ЖЖЖ. It's far too much explanation. His father died. His mother died. Now it's ...

LOL. Unserious, but good for the lulz.

Hmm. Intreating story. Quite short, we know. I am somewhat confused. You threw a lot of information about the backstory at us in a very short space of words, yet ...

F-f-fantastic work. I loved the ending. What a twist! Their girlfriends?! HE WOULDN'T! *wipes tear* I have to say this is one of the most gut-wrenching, tear-jerking, heart-to-heart pieces of ...

This is a good poem. I like the idea about writing about insomnia. I think you should pick a stanza scheme, because the rhythm gets lost a few times here. ...

This is an interesting poem. I think you definitely had some nice ideas here. I'm drifting, falling, flying away, away to the place where my dreams live. I'm blurring the ...

WOW the last review is quite mean. I actually liked this poem. It's funky, it's imaginative, it's fantasy. I don't know what an inkling is here, but I love the ...

This poem is simple, but a great metaphor. I like how you spiraled everything down, just like the progressing cold and bareness of fall. Very well done, I also love ...

I love this poem, it's sweet and beautiful and I adore the ending. I like the idea of holding a "fragment of heaven." A tiny matchstick to begin with a ...