TheClosetKidnapper

I love how much emotion you put in this! :D I haven't read the chapters before this but I most definitely will now. The only thing that really stands out ...

Love Jack's Mannequin!

Wow. This is really good. I can't really find anything to point out but I'm not that great of an editor either. :) Great story though. I'm looking forward to ...

I love this! :) The only thing I see is to possibly change "For love 'don't need planes" to "For love doesn't need planes."

I'm not ready yet To say goodbye again So much that I wanted to say For every try, the words just ran away. No, I'm not ready this time To ...

Wow. I liked the beginning the best because there was more emotion conveyed and it was more in-depth in my opinion. I also really really liked the main character's attitude! ...

I like the poem. I've had a few fights with friends and understand where this comes from and the questions you have when it does happen. You have a good ...

Tick-tock, Kara White watched the clock as she waited for the bell to ring to dismiss her from this wasted period of "ACT". The only real purpose of having this ...