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Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
7/10. I love The Fray and NeverShoutNever and Snow Patrol is good too. 1. Something to Believe In - Parachute 2. Mad World - Tears For Fears 3. Made To ...
Dec 30, 2011 -
Re: That song in my head...
Are we still having fun? Are you holding the gun? Take the money and run we'll never go home I've got nothing to lose you've got nothing to say and ...
Dec 30, 2011 -
Re: Blues' Fiction Reviews, inc. [Closed]
Hey Ahmad, would you mind reviewing the first few chapters of the novel I started? I got a few good reviews on my first but after that the numbers went ...
Dec 30, 2011 -
Re: The Viral Chronicles (accepting characters)
Name: Olivia "Liv" Thompson Gender: Female Age: 16 Appearance: data:image/jpeg;base64,/9j/4AAQSkZJRgABAQAAAQABAAD/2wCEAAkGBhQSEBIUEhQVFBQUFBYUFBQUFBQXFBQVFxQVFBQVFRQXHCYeFxwjGRQUHy8gIycpLCwsFR4xNTAqNS
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: H.E.R.O. and H.I.V.E.
Name- Charlotte "Char" Drakes Age- 16 Gender- Female School- HERO Appearance- Charlotte has long chestnut brown hair and grey eyes. She's about 5'7 and femininely built though she has a ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: H.E.R.O. and H.I.V.E.
A hero female and male. I'll make a profile soon
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"A knife? Galileo, c'mere boy! Let's play fetch with this short but shiny stick!" - Doc Monroe. "I would slowly, one by one, scar the faces of the people who ...
Dec 28, 2011 -
Re: Recruited: Chapter Five
Okay, so this one is told from Brandon's view, Lis' brother. It takes place after the flash. Any comments would be much appreciated! :D Brandon: The light faded and I ...
Dec 24, 2011 -
Re: hmm, dunnooo!
This is great. I like the whole freak/genetic mutation thing. I don't really see any errors or anything. Overall it's very well-written. Can't wait to read more!
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Wishing on Stars, Praying for Miracles [1]
This is great. You have vivid adjectives and have set the tone very well. The only thing I could see from an editing viewpoint is where you say adolescent children ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Mitchell
This is amazing! One thing though, you have some rhyme starting in the second stanza but it's absent in the first. If you're going to rhyme, rhyme everywhere. Other than ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Recruited: Chapter Four
This is told from Jason's point of view, obviously, taking place after he was taken to the medics. I know it's a little short but I believe that it shows ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Star Wars: If Luke had gone to the Dark side.
This is great! I always wondered what would happen if he turned... You did a great job showing it!
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Catching snowflakes - a Christmas short story
This is such a heartfelt story! :D Just a few things though. First, in the second paragraph you mention the word dreaming twice in one sentence. I think that you ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Spark chapter one, part two
This is a very interesting read. I like it. One thing though, you say "pwrful" in Ember's thoughts around the fifth or forth to last paragraph. It should be "powerful" ...
Dec 14, 2011