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Re: A little favor
Hmmn. By the drawings I'm guessing you need people of, say, a tree-dwelling elf race? Well. The female figure first. Her hair is fine. But if she were a hunter ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Roll Up, Roll Up
Hello~ I'm starting this thread out of love for reviewing and abhorrence of boredom. I'm Button - call me that - and I will be happy to review your work. ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Miss Spoiler
And this is in a literary forum. You can say whatever you want about my bad taste but this is a writer's society, and misusing forum options isn't really something ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: A little favor
Ah, this happens to all of us. The first time I attached an image the poxy thing died or summat. Or it flew away. Firstly, an easy way to attach ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Harmony
This poem is not mine, but the story is the idea from the poem. hope you like it and be harsh... Oh, some of the best ideas come from poems. ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Between Shades of Gray
Oh. Your review alone is quite enough to make me add this to my reading list. This reminds me of another, quite different story I've read - Nicholas and Alexandra. ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: You Can't Cheat Death
Whoa, ha ha. What is this I see? You took three things I despise - a cliche, typical young-adult fiction and anthropomorphisms of Death - and turned them into this ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The step I'm about to take
Oh my. Better than fiddling with them pesky attachment thingys, just use BBCode to attach the picture from an external server. I use Photobucket, which provides the code if you ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Princess Aaron
There are a few spelling and punctuation mistakes, dear, but I'm going to nitpick. Not really in the mood to. There were a few places where a comma would've come ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Death Card
Not bad! :D I did see the lack of setting, though, but that's just the main problem here. There were a few small things I found bugging me, however... My ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: staring down the barrel
It all began so quickly neither side had time to blink before reacting. The news was announced one quiet Tuesday night - it had been a quiet Tuesday night where ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Sneak Peek at YWS Renovation
It looks very good, and about the fact that it doesn't work well with auld versions of IE? Apt revenge for those who've stuck by that dinosaur. Google is the ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: I'm Over Here!
Oh hai. If you're okay with it, could you review my work? It's the first chapter of something, but I screwed up trying to put it in novel format. So ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The July 31st Day of Review! (GMT)
I totally love how India's got its own time block there. xD JK. Let's make this Review Day rule!
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: DELETE
Oh my. Was this poem an 'impulse' thing? I see it's dotted with little errors. They just crush my soul With there lies of deceit 'Their' should be used in ...
Jul 29, 2011
