TheBoyWhoFloed

You come from a far away place, One that I cannot describe, Still, I am your champion, But I do not wear armor as I wish I could, Or ride ...

I know like i said before a lot of the rhymes are elementary, i really want to fix it.

I can here ther critisism already. I worte this poem with a friend. It Switches perspective when ever it says 'Guy' or 'Girl'. So if it says 'Guy' above a ...

Guy.... I messed up, We both know its true, I need you back, It’s getting harder to breath, and my face is turning blue. I'll sit here in Agony, And ...

This poem was revised and completely rewritten, with new words and everything. But the message is still the same. It definitly the most unique love poem i've ever written.

You beat me and abuse me, but I won't hit you back, it stings and it bleeds, but I love the whips crack. It always assumed, that all love is ...

This poem is very powerful, very enjoyable. Impossible to not be liked. Kudos

I don't mean to be rude but I didn't really like this poem. It's seems below average, like something that was forced out instead of letting it flow out of ...

I wrote this for a person that a care for more than they know. It started out as something i was venting with but it turned into something more

I wish I had her, But she’s under his spell, I just can’t take this, My passion doesn’t end well. I spy her elated by him, It braids my pleasure ...

I think it was really good, in an exquisite sort of way. Nice stuff.

thankies

tthanks Liz

its interesting, lol. nice work.

I wrote this story last summer. Enjoy! “Are you done yet?” she said knocking on the stall door. “Almost,” I chuckled back. “Hurry up! The movie is going to start ...