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Another poem part of my final project on stereotypes. (I promise I'll stop posting so much, haha.) Please, criticize away! I'd really appreciate it. Unnoticeable. Inconspicuous. Invisible. To my peers

This poem will most likely be part of my final project for this semester, so please, if you have any advice or suggestions, go at 'er! a word that describes ...

Another poem from my final project this semester, a rough draft. Criticism needed, please! "Raise the bar." It seems pretty high already, if you ask me. Pushing, sacrificing, stressing. For ...

Hello out there, this is part of a small poetry anthology I'm working on for my creative writing class' final project. Criticism and suggestions would be greatly appreciated, because then ...

First thing that I noticed was that the first letter of each sentence was not capitalized. Correct punctuation is important, because it makes writing easier to read. In general, people ...

Take me back to the land of pretend, where Prince Charming isn't a lie. Where mermaids grow legs, where people don't age. Where love never ends, there are no pleading ...

I think this is a good, strong poem. You instantly get an image in your head, and where it rhymes, it doesn't seemed forced. I really don't have enough experience ...

Thank you!! I'll work on changing that :) It's kind of based off of a real story, but I can definitelysee how that would be unrealistic, I'll work on that ...

Scene One (Curtains open to a high school lunch room. Three girls are sitting at the end of a crowded table. The girls are talking in hushed tones, as if ...

Thanks, to both of you! I adore criticism. My friends always pull the lazy "Ohh, I like it!" move so they don't have to proofread or insult me, and my ...

I like this one, it makes you think. Life beyond death is a scary topic, yet something everyone has to deal with. I think you did a pretty good job ...

I seriously loved this poem! Was it about someone cutting themselves? That's what it reminded me of at least. I love how you used lines, colours, etc. to describe it ...

This is an older poem of mine, that I found when I was flipping through my notebook the other day. I'd really love some criticism, tell me what you like, ...

This isn't a piece of crap! I actually really liked it. I like how you made it seem like you were talking to someone else, maybe a mean girl at ...

The layout for this poem is great in my opinion. I was a little confused about what it was actually about though, I thought maybe two people waiting for something ...