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I suppose i could continue with my character. If that's alright. This part doesn't have any other of the characters but mentions and talks about them so I figured that ...

How many more crown members are needed?

Would you mind reviewing my work?

I'm gonna try but I'm not sure if i can do it. Maybe this will be the motiveation to get over my writers block :)

Would you mind reviewing the first chapters of my novel, Welcome to Orba Nova?

Would you mind reviewing the first chapters of my piece Welcome to Orba Nova?

Name: Erina Storm Gender: Female Age: 17 Appearance: Tall and thin with blue eyes and natural red hair. She is strong but not overly so. She normally wears a white ...

Hi, could you please review the first chapters of my book Welcome to Orba Nova. Here is the link -Thanks :D

Would you please review the first chapters of my fantasy novel, Welcome to Orba Nova?

Hi, I would love a review for the first chapter of my novel, Welcome to Orba Nova. If you have anything for me to review please let me know:)

Hey could u review the first few chapters of my book Welcome to Orba Nova? I just finnished rewriting the first chapters and could use a good review :) Thanks ...

Hey, if anyone wants a review please post. I will do my best to give you a legit review and promise to be firm but fair. I will NOT review ...

First things first, you need a story. Think about your audience and who you want to write to before you begin so you can write decently. For example, if your ...

I think it kinda depends, in some stories its okay for the MC to move on after a year and a half. Maybe the wife sick for a long time ...

Hey i have started to write a novel called Welcome To Orba Nova and was looking for a review. My first chapter needs work due to it kinda sucks but ...