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Re: It Yearns.
Would I be wrong to ask for nothing more? To hold you with my iris', to skim your skin with my gaze. I've never seen faults so beautiful, scars so ...
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Re: Undeserving
Sometimes.. When I hear the comments. The compliments. The sentiments.. My heart persists in growing cold. I draw inside myself and coat my hopes With biting words; colorless fantasies. The ...
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Re: You, I Love
You I love. You’re so sweet. I’ve got butterflies that reach my feet [Maybe it's just me but I feel as if this line was used as a last ditch ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Deadwood Forest
Well, I wrote this song while playing guitar (acoustic). Not necessarily Rock but I would say some Adult Alternative. To give you a better idea.. Setting; Alone in my room, ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Jus do beta
I could see this poem in a setting where it's being spoken. Reading it doesn't have the effect as it would have through speech. I agree, you do ask a ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: A Kiss
You know that feeling? Where.. Movement is a festered tale among legends? The sun's warmth has an added.. tinge of completeness to it? Clouds seem to be.. .. driving the ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: You
Hi there! I'm slipping in to give you a review. :D I'd have to admit, there are an immense amount of commas in here. (Perdido already stated this). If you ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: You're dying.
I'm going to be honest, while reading I was searching for some type of meaning or significance and couldn't find it. And the fact that I was not able to ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Deadwood Forest
Verse 1 I took that path again.. The one overgrown with weeds and shrubs. I lost all peace of mind for the second time. I was alone, there in.. all ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Wonderful Plague
(A poem I wrote a while ago.) Haha, wow.. You don't see me do you? Asking that question is redundant. Meaningless. Thriving beneath this tangible surface lies a gem. My ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Howdeh!
Sups sups. Name's Jasmine. I enjoy writing. (Surprising right?) Looking forward to reading prose, poems and whatnot from various writers; younger, of age, or older. Haha, not much else. :) ...
Apr 2, 2010
