The-Phantoms-Thorne

Hyde In Paris 1. The salt spray from the choppy waters stung the pale cheeks of the painfully thin and haggard gentleman who stood hunched over the railing of the ...

I've read other excerpts of this on the NaNo boards and it never fails to amaze me that you are so talented. It is a very funny concept that reminds ...

There are a few punctuation errors that I noticed. For example, it is easier not to have a full stop at the end of a line of dialogue if you ...

I chose "other". I think the appeal is starting with an idea and having random characters that I didn't plan on appearing mid-way through the manuscript and expecting to be ...

Did it! 50,032. MORE TO COME!

Oh the Firefly one (Ballad of Serenity, how ironic!) ruled!

Aww, AoD! That was cool! I quite like this long bit: After his manservant had departed, Dr. Jekyll turned to Emilie and gave her a warm smile. “Perhaps, since we ...

Two wonderful whoopsies committed by Dr. Jekyll, who apparently doesn't need to transform to be stupid: 1. Reaching for a small lemon tart, Jekyll's brow creased slightly. “Why did the ...

I hit the halfway mark last night! Woot! Current word count is: 25237. Not even CLOSE to what has to happen, though Hyde and Celeste are FINALLY together... after an ...

Oh that's BRILLIANT! Means I don't have to get ALL of Ed and Henry's story out in one month! Hurrah!

*grins at GryphonFledgling* Well, that CAN be arranged... providing you don't mind the action swinging wildly and pendulum-like between violence and impropriety. This IS Edward Hyde we're dealing with

Yeah... Armand just rocked up during Hyde's version of the Dies Irae as a total surprise. I now have a narcissistic killer on my hands who wants to train Edward. ...

Last night's effort: Feeling a little weary are we, Henry? Jekyll opened his eyes and stared down at the silver tray that held a number of thin, measuring instruments. Hyde's ...

I quite like your work, Cheshire Cat. When you're done, I'd love to read the finished work. I also love yours, alwaysawriter. It's brilliantly written to evoke the fear in ...

... if it helps.