ThanatosPrinciple

Hey! This took me a while to space out properly! Gosh, YWS had better make this a lot easier! Anyway, enjoy. This was my punishment. Basically, my parents forced me ...

I agree. And I also LOVE the generator! Some weird stuff like this comes out a lot, yeah, but it's really interesting that way! Oh, FYI, at the end, the ...

Wow KJ this is great! Are you a Twilight fan? Cause if you are I bet this was inspired from that! Anyway, twilight or not, this is a wonderful beginning. ...

Wow. I'm too much in awe of the sentient being you've created with words to comment thoroughly. I think you should definitely try to elaborate more. It really is fascinating, ...

This is very interesting. Very interesting. Let's be practical first. The very first sentence, I think, is a little long. It also has a few grammatical errors (I believe) and ...

I really like this story. It may be challenged a little bit plotwise, but the writing is definitely sophisticated. I think you should make the story have more action. It ...

"Your story is about a construction worker in a mental institution appreciating alliteration." The place was white, white on white on white. The walls were white, the tables were white, ...

First of all, this is an extremely biased opinion on whether to remove our troops from Iraq. It's also a great way to begin a heated debate. People will react ...

So, let's see. I'm very callous, sorry (in advance) The Parents They weren't hysterical enough. Their kid just kicked the bucket, and they sound like they're mourning a favourite guinea ...

I forgot to mention it in the review, but spacing is a big problem. You can't review a story if it's too hard to read.

It's an interesting concept, women overturning the tables and taking over the government etc. etc. I think it could be applied better in the story, however. The story begins very ...

You know, I'm not really sure what it is that 'an ode to sarcasm' is. What was it supposed to be. Plus, you asked for it to be reviewed, and ...

OK, so, it's a very dark beginning. I thought you told more than showed, basically you used too little descriptions that showed the reader what was happening. Anyway, you need ...

You know, I think I've heard something like this before. I dunno, but I think I memorized it from somewhere and then wrote it randomly. Tell me if you've heard ...

I'm not sure of what to think of this poem. Some parts were confusing, and how you called the boy who whistled 'stupid'. Some of the wording should be changed ...