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Re: Crystal Stars First Try. Please skip to REAL first chapter.
To the ones who have reviewed my work: Thank you Grimy, and especially Beckiw! I'm really new at writing, so bring on the rewiews!. When I read things myself, I ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Crystal Stars First Try. Please skip to REAL first chapter.
To the Readers; This is my second post, and all critique is welcomed with open arms. My grammar's not that great, I need to work on "show, don't tell", and ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: The Life of Nemera Sandrine, Chapter 1, Part 1
Note to readers: I would love even the harshest critique, anything to improve my writing! I know it needs some work, and any advice on what needs to be fixed ...
Jan 18, 2009
