TexanWriter

To the ones who have reviewed my work: Thank you Grimy, and especially Beckiw! I'm really new at writing, so bring on the rewiews!. When I read things myself, I ...

To the Readers; This is my second post, and all critique is welcomed with open arms. My grammar's not that great, I need to work on "show, don't tell", and ...

Do not let the size of this story frighten you. :oops: Hey, my name’s Nova, though I don’t know where I got it. I was an urchin, living in the ...

Hiya, fun4eva! I have a reviewing system of Positives and Negatives. Let's get started: Negatives: In the beginning, I had no idea that they were in a college bathroom, or ...

Hey, Vivacious! I review things on a system of positives and negatives. Well, here goes (if I can stop laughing long enough): Negatives: But, The smell stretches far. "the" should ...

Negatives: A cool story, although one thing did confuse me: A forth one stitched the baby up and then handed him off to the man near the slime and he ...

This is amazing, and I only found one typo: “Is that all?” I gasped, leaning back in my chair to breathe a sigh of relief. So it wasn’t her teachers, ...

Note to readers: I would love even the harshest critique, anything to improve my writing! I know it needs some work, and any advice on what needs to be fixed ...

Hey, asxz! I think this was very well written, in fact beautifully, although a few questions DID come to mind: ~What was he a captive of? ~Who were the men? ...

I picked the actual writing, because I love finding out how the story will end up. I make up a beginning, and see where it all goes from there!

Nemera woke up to the wail of her alarm clock. She felt around on her nightstand for it, since her roommates never hid it in the same place twice. In ...

I really enjoyed this except for one part: I feel his hand brush my cheek, I feel him coming closer, his nose grazing mine as he tilts his head to ...

Positives I found how you described the sights in paragraph one and smells in paragraph three were really well done! I loved Roberts sense of humor, and it interested me ...