TexanWriter

Ummm... I don't know how to say this and be nice... is this really a poem? It looks more like a relation to words. If that's what you were doing, ...

This was all right for the start. I think next time maybe you should keep from speaking about your character in the first person unless you introduce special traits to ...

Dear Readers, Thank you for reviewing. I will try to fix everything and be a little more specific. DestinyIsCalling: Thank you for the over-all review! You didn't read the first ...

Ummm... Well, *cough* it was... interesting. I think it was really more a biography than a prologue to a story. I would like to see where you go with this. ...

Please read the first chapter of Crystal Stars before you read this one, if you haven’t already. Thank you. I sat on the city wall watching the pink and blue ...

Thank you all who have helped me! I have edited this a bunch of times, and it is so much better than before :) Thanks again!

This is an interesting story, and I would like to read the next part. I do have one suggestion, though, and it is: PARAGRAPHS!!! I almost didn't read the last ...

Somehow, one way or another, I'm immune to the sight of blood. It's just this little red liqued to me now. I don't know... Maybe it's from all the battle ...

Thank you for the critique. Poems aren't really my thing, so this was just a try-it-out kind of thing :) Thanks again!

Cold-Blooded Kill Rated PG-13 for detailed gore. As I ran through the darkened wood A feeling crept through me. I didn’t feel as I knew I should. There was something ...

Life.

Thank you, beckiw and Amon360, for your critiques. beckiw: Thanks for pointing out a few things that did seem unclear. I would like to know more about what was confusing ...

When Price Jen’li became king, he banished the races that he thought were dangerous. The vampires, said to be bloodthirsty demons, were exiled, along with the dwarves, to stupid and ...

I would like to inform my readers that I WILL be rewriting the first chapter. Now I have the whole bok mapped out, and things should seem much better so ...

I wrote little things like "The girl who did note lik to tak baths" when i was... Oh, five or six? But I seriously started writing about a year ago. ...