TexanWriter

mhmmcolleenx0 - COMPLETED Anyone else?

Hey! Tex here, reviewing your work. GRAMMAR Honestly, I didn't find any grammar problems. Nice job! Nit-picks Shane grabbed Dallas's hand and led her to one of the teal couches. ...

Would anyone care for a review from me? I don't bite! ;)

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:D Hello, greetings, salutations, howdy, hola, and everything else that means "Hey!" :D I will gladly, happily, and merrily review and critique your art or photography! Just post a link. ...

Hello again! Once again, it is asked that you review others works before you post your own. That way everyone gets a chance to improve, because no one's perfect! GRAMMAR: ...

*Stares at JD and Bolt weirdly* Why... not... on... Discussion thread?? Yeah, that's fine. But let's just land this boat and have action that doesn't directly involve shadows! Woohoo! First, ...

Hi! I'm Tex, and I'm here to give you a review. So, let's see what others haven't already noticed: Grammar You seem to switch tenses, from Past tense to Present, ...

Yeah, intense scenes are THE best thing to write. So fun! ***************** -RAVEN- I stood in a place that I'd never wanted to go back to again: my childhood. This ...

I think shadow attacks are becoming cliché… ha! Aw, come on, I’m not that strict, am I? Don’t worry about DT stuff too much. Everything else is loosey-goosey! Let’s get ...

... Oh for frikin' Pete's sake, it's okay to have a little limelight now and then. The world isn't comepletely equal, or fair, or anything of the like. If it ...

Since when is that short, Rei? That’s a good sized post! Erm, what god-modding? *Looks around frantically* -RAVEN- “I’m sorry, Kelly,” I said, my tough-girl side having jumped out the ...

*AHEM* No one's posting... [MOVING ON TO NEXT DAY, BUT JUSTDANCE CAN POST FOR LAST SITUATION IF SHE POSTS FIRST]

Banned for thinking it wasn't. *slowly walks in front of custom title*

Oh... Heh, heh... *Shuffles out of room*