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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Palabras de un disidente

    Me encantó! Me parece la idea de este poema como tal. Amo esa idea de ser diferente, de no dejarse llevar por la corriente. Sinceramente, me parece brillante. Amo la ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Swaying Over the Borderline

    Wow. I don't even know how to describe this. I loved it so much. I definitely felt it. Like, felt it. There's so much depth in these few lines. While ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Kaleidoscope Introduction

    Muchas gracias por leerla y muchas gracias por tu comentario. :) Ya corregí el error de dedo. -Teresa

    Nov 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Kaleidoscope Introduction

    This is a novel I'm currently writing in Spanish, but I decided to translate the first chapter just so people on here can review it :) Here's the Spanish version ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Dancing In The Moonlight

    I just noticed you wrote a romantic story! This is pretty good.You should write more of these. I'll be glad to review them, since I'm such a fan of romance. ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Unknown and the Forbidden

    Hi. Quite an intriguing story. I think it lacked of context a bit. Why are they there? I understand it might be intentional, adding a little more mystery into it, ...

    Oct 20, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Never Be Said

    This is really great! I tried to find some flaws, but I found nothing. It is completely astounding. I hope you do continue it, because I feel it's a bit ...

    Oct 20, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I intended to kiss you.

    Thanks for your reply! I've corrected what everyone told me :)

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: By the Red Fence (Prolouge)

    Hey! So, I found this really good. The way you put words is pretty special. Something I really love is the way Ian's feelings can be perceived by anyone reading ...

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Fly

    So, I really liked this story. It has a flow that makes it deep and original. I love the way you describe the characters, and give it a special way ...

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I intended to kiss you.

    Thanks a lot for your reviews! I'll surely try to improve. This is my first time writing an actual story in English, and your revies will certainly help :) Thanks!

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I intended to kiss you.

    That dance had been special beyond measure. I expected I'd be alone all night, and I've got to admit that he caught me by surprise when he told me he ...

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Romeo and Cinderella

    I loved this story because everybody tries having modern Romeo and Juliet or a modern Cinderella, but I've never seen anybody put them together and in such a good way. ...

    Oct 8, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Falling Slowly

    This story is great. It truly is. I thought it would be the typical hate to love kind of story, but it wasn't. It almost made me cry. I loved ...

    Oct 3, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Dark In A Man

    Hey. So I usually don't love action stories, but this one really caught my attention. I like it. It's pretty captivating. I felt like somehow, I needed to know more. ...

    Sep 27, 2011


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