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Re: Palabras de un disidente
Me encantó! Me parece la idea de este poema como tal. Amo esa idea de ser diferente, de no dejarse llevar por la corriente. Sinceramente, me parece brillante. Amo la ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Swaying Over the Borderline
Wow. I don't even know how to describe this. I loved it so much. I definitely felt it. Like, felt it. There's so much depth in these few lines. While ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Kaleidoscope Introduction
Muchas gracias por leerla y muchas gracias por tu comentario. :) Ya corregí el error de dedo. -Teresa
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Kaleidoscope Introduction
This is a novel I'm currently writing in Spanish, but I decided to translate the first chapter just so people on here can review it :) Here's the Spanish version ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Dancing In The Moonlight
I just noticed you wrote a romantic story! This is pretty good.You should write more of these. I'll be glad to review them, since I'm such a fan of romance. ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: The Unknown and the Forbidden
Hi. Quite an intriguing story. I think it lacked of context a bit. Why are they there? I understand it might be intentional, adding a little more mystery into it, ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Never Be Said
This is really great! I tried to find some flaws, but I found nothing. It is completely astounding. I hope you do continue it, because I feel it's a bit ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: I intended to kiss you.
Thanks for your reply! I've corrected what everyone told me :)
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: By the Red Fence (Prolouge)
Hey! So, I found this really good. The way you put words is pretty special. Something I really love is the way Ian's feelings can be perceived by anyone reading ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Fly
So, I really liked this story. It has a flow that makes it deep and original. I love the way you describe the characters, and give it a special way ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: I intended to kiss you.
Thanks a lot for your reviews! I'll surely try to improve. This is my first time writing an actual story in English, and your revies will certainly help :) Thanks!
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: I intended to kiss you.
That dance had been special beyond measure. I expected I'd be alone all night, and I've got to admit that he caught me by surprise when he told me he ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Romeo and Cinderella
I loved this story because everybody tries having modern Romeo and Juliet or a modern Cinderella, but I've never seen anybody put them together and in such a good way. ...
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: Falling Slowly
This story is great. It truly is. I thought it would be the typical hate to love kind of story, but it wasn't. It almost made me cry. I loved ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: The Dark In A Man
Hey. So I usually don't love action stories, but this one really caught my attention. I like it. It's pretty captivating. I felt like somehow, I needed to know more. ...
Sep 27, 2011
