Tenyo

G'dafternoon wonderful YWSers. I need some help with endings. I just can't do them >.< I think the problem I have is I get too enthusiastic about *everything* so when ...

The best advice I've been given on this topic is exactly what Holysocks said. Try it out on younger audiences. Their culture is built differently to ours in that most ...

Huh? Oh, I didn't really review your entire story. If I did I would have had many more positive things to squish in there =] I just figured that to ...

Hi AneiDoru So... I went through the liberty of glancing over some of The Light Maiden's Mark and picked out a few examples of where I might be able to ...

Do it =D I adore journal style stories. I love the whimsicality and disorder that the format allows because it means you can see the constant writing and rewriting of ...

Hey MrPhox! I love the concept of this, it sounds really fun. My only advice is to make sure you take your 16-year-old seriously, and remember to avoid falling into ...

Hi Kiri! I took a quick glance through your portfolio. It looks like your descriptions are very systematic. It's very much a description of what is there rather than anything ...

Hi Red! I love this idea sooo much. Personally, I'm not a fan of redemption stories that provide some kind of mirror image, they tend to be a bit to ...

Tag me if you post it up! = D

This sounds interesting. I've toyed with a similar idea before but never tried it. What I particularly like about RPG characters like you described is that instead of having to ...

Hi Comrie! Thank you for posting. This is a feeling that really hits home and you're not the only one who goes through it. Academic pressure (as I have learned ...

The interesting thing about myths and fairytales is that they survive because people tell them over and over again, each person adding their own twist or imagination to the story, ...

That sound pretty good. Basing it in current society adds that creepy, uncanny aspect to it that it genuinely could be happening right now and nobody would know. Let me ...

This is a really interesting concept. It has similarities to the Divergent Trilogy, which if you haven't read yet you might want to check out. In Divergent the experiment is ...

I don't think eyes shake when people are excited... but there might be some technical sciency thing that I don't know about. Sometimes if a person is particularly excited about ...