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Interesting question! Okay, so, what you seem to be doing here is skipping through snapshots. It's not that your tense is wrong for what you're trying to achieve, but more ...

If it inspires you, write it whether we like it or not. It's your work. If all else fails perhaps your girlfriend will appreciate the sentiment anyway.

Nice article! Veeren too. I think it's good to get multiple opinions on the same questions because everyone works differently. There's also a lot of cool information in here so ...

I love this idea! I think it provides huge opportunities for tension and development. The moral lines are so ambiguous you could turn any situation into a thought-provoking or concience-twisting ...

*Pushes* *Pushes* *Breaks* *Falls into semi-concious streaming* *Drowns in a pit of obscurity*

I like! Showing not Telling is really hard to get the hang of, but using examples like this is a great way to explain. My favourite example is this; Lucy ...

Imagine you were going on an adventure trail with someone and you're the leader. The first thing you have to do is figure out all the places along the route ...

When my youth group are all sleepy and slush-brained I tend to initiate a debate with them in which I give them all completely radical and irrational arguments to proclaim. ...

So. If I'm trying to work on an important project I get all tied up and can't think of any ideas, but if I'm just writing nonesense then I come ...

Blimey Rosey >.< I know little about geography, so the place names don't make much sense. I do like the idea though, and by the amount of effort you've put ...

1.Any ideas on how to start off the chapter? Preferably at the beginning. Although, you could start at the end of the scene/ordeal, and work backwards, or start in the ...

Heed the wise words of the Rosey Unicorn. Personally, I'm a huge fan of switching perspectives. One of my favourite novels, Across the Nightingale Floor is told in first person, ...

Seems pretty cool ^__^ Just to add: Prize is 5.000(thousand) euros. Technical issues are subject to Italian laws. Prada maintains exclusive publishing and editing rights if you win. If you ...

Creative Offering... is not an Annual Literature and Art Journal... nor does it have any such contest running. Unless you're from another organisation under the same name. Also, your link ...

Simileees! Oh how I love them. When you can't figure out how to describe something, just describe something else! Works every time. The beat was a slow, sickly ba-thump , ...