Tempest

Oh Tempest...I don't know if that was a side shot at people trying to help here, but Snoink's advice was solid, and I mean REALLY solid. If you broke down ...

Woah! This is really good. I like your writing style a lot. I was left wondering about "The Guardian" and would have liked to know a little more about it, ...

I'm back after a few months and just want to say thanks for all your praise and help i really appreciate it :)

None of you probably know me :roll:, but I'm back after a few months of inactivity:D.

I liked this, my only gripe would be the spacing, but i see the kind person above me has already touched on that point. I am left intrigued, which is ...

Hehe! A clever poem :o . I liked how the song/arists were incorperated into the poem (this was done very well). Some bits I didn't understand, but I'm sure thats ...

Tempest like... :). However I can't understand the subtleties and metaphor of poetry I do like this poem, it really had, whats the word... Feeling? Character? Hmm... Anyways in my ...

Hey thinker ;)! The battle scenes were good! Your chosen language for the fight between the stormtroopers and the rebels was also excellent. I only have one nitpick; you mentioned ...

Hey Thinker! I thought it was a nice metaphor, but I also agree that you should make it more subtle, I think the overall effect of this would be better. ...

Hi ;), I don't usually check out Fanfiction... But as it's you I'll make an exception. You obviously know your Star Wars. Personally I think it was too short a ...

Hello thar! Glad you could make it 8) . Do I know you from somewhere ;). I'll be looking out for your work :)! If you need any help feel ...

Errr... lol he is a ugly froggy Should be an.

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! What's your favourite anime? Mine would have to be Bleach ;).

WOW! Well this is praise indeed, thanks! I'll look into edditing those bits :wink: . Owen Bytheway, does Aedrial's name have a meaning? I'm just curious. Not that I know ...

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