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Re: All that glitters is not gold
Some people say love is the most important thing in a marriage. Others say wealth is important. Yet others also say both are important. I am man who understands love ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Hush
Wow! First of all, I would like to commend you on the fact that you let your emotion go wild on paper without changing anything. Also, I am awestruck by ...
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Re: Breaking Rules
Nice piece! It sound's like it came from the imaginations of a young child vibrant and alive. Nice one! Keep writing
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Re: No Sympathy.
Nice poem! I love the poetic diction cause it's so self-explanatory. I also love the fact that the poem acts as the window into your emotions. Giving your poem a ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: O, Watchman, Sitting on the Roof
Hey! Well the flaws I saw in this poem have already been spoken of by the past reviewers. Although not all the the qualities of the poem have been spoken ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: The White Antidote
Nice poem! I like the fact that the poem focuses on what we teenagers do everyday to unravel but you presented something so simple into a dramatic piece. I also ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Amen.
Wow! This is poem is powerful. It is a poem that keeps the reader going till the very last word. It definitely resonates a voice that pierces into the mind ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: My Body
Hi! I love this poem! In my opinion, The poetic diction is self-explanatory which makes it easy for a reader to relate to the poem. I also love the voice ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Paintballing: Dawn of World War 111
As I cautiously entered the sturdy chained door, Quickly scanning my new surroundings, Paintball all over, like an array of bespattered blood on floor, My heart thumping rapidly as it ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Ripples in the Water
Hi! It's quite smart of you to put this poem under the category of Lyric Poetry. I feel that your words and the voice it conveys is more of a ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: iced tea
Hi! I like the fact that this poem is simple and yet it conveys a message which the reader has to carefully look for. It wasn't really hard for me ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Essence of Truth
What is truth? Can anyone ever fathom the essence of truth? Does anyone understand and grasp the full aura of truth? Some say truth can be found in the bowels ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Placing My Heart In Your Hands
Hi, I am new to the society and am really amazed at the amount of voices I see in people's writing. Concerning your piece, your poetic diction made it easy ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: I'll Choose To Believe
Hi, I am new to this society and I am certainly amazed by the diverse voices I see in the writers' pieces of work in this society. Concerning this particular ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Sin
That single word sends a shiver down my spine; It gnashes at my soul with its claws. I try my hardest to scurry away from it; Just like a rat ...
Apr 11, 2011
