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Wow!! This is a remarkable symphony of poetry. Your poetic diction was excellent, your voice was clear, distinct and strong. You choice of words gave sensuous imagery. The mood was ...

Hello! It was a beautiful poem and I would like to review. Here we go! First of all, the poetic diction. The language of the poem was simple and understandable, ...

Well. It's a good poem. It feels like a poem of clarity. There was no imagery. The imagery was more like emotions. This is a first for me and strangely ...

I am not here to review but to commend on how great the voice was in this piece. Also, strangely it seems we had the same inspiration. I would like ...

Although I would reviews, I wrote this piece for people to reflect on what they do and see if it glorifies God. Here we go! T. J. Alufa Earth. ‘‘Pass ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope am not too late. So, let's get to the point. I look for 4 things in a poem: imagery, poetic diction, mood and voice. Using ...

This is a good poem! The poetic diction is very simple and to the point, which is good. The imagery was very sensuous, I could actually imgaine every movement in ...

T minus 10 days That's what the silver screen told us We all breathe the virus So the end is here. T minus 9 days She heard the news Too ...

I feel trapped. Suffering from a phobia; Words, Can’t comprehend. Am in a world, Where colours; Are like the stuttering lips; Of a lonesome fool. The people are lifeless. Dead, ...

''Run with the wind'' I say! But you gape at me, With defiance; Sprawled at the corners of your eyes. You crouch at my feet, With all the splendour you ...

This a nicely written piece. There are 3 things I look for in a poem: voice, poetic diction & imagery, tone &mood. So here we go! Voice: I love the ...

Green- I like Yellow- I don't like Red- I don't understand In the after, my soul swims in the heavens, and flies in the river. I fall into the abysmal ...

Nice poem! I love your voice. It was simple and quite to the point. I also love your poetic diction it made the imagery quite powerful and distinct. Just one ...

Nice poem! I love your poetic diction. It was self-explanatory making the imagery quite easy to visualise. I also love the voice. It was compelling and it makes the reader ...

First of all: WELCOME! Apart from the fact (already pointed out) that you should shorten the lines, the poem is good. I love the voice. It was solemn and peaceful. ...