TellATaleForTwo

I will be adding to this i think. I just wanted some feedback. thanx ~Tina

Crazy Me This is my crazy song. My faith, My redemption, My hopes, The turning of a new leaf. This is me. Unveiled. Untold. Unfinished. The birth of a legend. ...

Awsome! you have such a talent for description! i could picture everything perfectly in my mind. even with some of the best writers that can be a problem. I honestly ...

The Northern areas of the woods were forbidden for superstitions. lol we spoke about this... oh whats that? oh your fixing it now? oh goody! i know. im retarded. lol ...

It started out with a nice flow then sort of tapered off and got bulky and wordy. extremely happy, or unbearably sad. You're a writer, yeah? You can find better ...

Mentality In between the mortal sins and the purest of hearts, lives the human mind; a contrast of good and evil, and yin and yang. It can think of things ...

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Surfer, the reason his pose is off balance is because he's levitating--if you'd looked at fontroy's original picture you'd realize that *rolls eyes* He doesn't need balance if he's floating ...

You read too many romantic fiction books. lmao Well i loved it! it was really good. one or two grammatical errors but overall, awsome! i will be looking for more! ...

Good begining. I would suggest making it bit more exciting though. Not much, just something to make the reader want to keep reading, something that really draws them in. I ...

Unrequited I am your shadow. Your guardian angel. The one you know is there. But can never really see. I help you along the way. And keep you out of ...

Wow. I am utterly speechless. I didn't notice your little blurb at the top at first so i just went straight to the pictures. I thought the first was a ...

Those Eyes It was my first day in a new school… again. It was also the fourth time we’d moved in the last eighteen months, so when my dad said ...

Wow. that was awsome. only thing i can think of is the way you phrase things and things like that. i cant really say anything that hasnt been coverd. this ...