TellATaleForTwo

A kiss. .......... Pretty please? That look... .......... Don't you love me? The hurt in his eyes. .......... How can you say such things? His back turned to me... .......... ...

I loved it Clau. Good Job! It was really funny.

I WANNA SEE THE 18+ ONE! what WAS that in the cup...? o_O *gasp* lewd images... lol

once again... AWSOME! *sits and waits patiently for more...*

I really enjoyed it, you did a good job at making it sound like a high schooler, with high schooler concerns. But there are a couple of things I noticed, ...

i liked what you were saying in the poem, but it came off as if you were just telling your feelings/ thoughts/ events in an... "unorganized" way, though i dont ...

YAY!!!! see? I told you! your awsomeness (and Ch.'s) has now been confirmed by someone other than your friends! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Opening Scene: The scene opens on a classroom. The teacher is talking to a student at her desk as the other students quietly talk amongst themselves. There is a knock ...

umm... where are the pictures...?

Hey Jon! I really liked this. Cant wait till you put up more. So ah... when will that be exactly???

Son of a -----! So Jonathan's in danger huh? *Sarah slammed the door and clicked the locks into place. Kyle suddenly felt very aware of everything in the hallway: its ...

The barmaid sighed. "Keep it clean boys. I don't need a mess on my hands."

Dragona!

"Would you like another pint?" asked the barmaid warmly. She hated it when people didn't like her, and she was pretty good at reading other peoples feelings, but other than ...

lmao wow okay so umm... yeah that was awsome! on to number 3!