TellATaleForTwo

I cant beleive i never commented on this before! I just wanted to let you know that i read this forever ago. around the time i first startde coming to ...

"Tell me what you see." God. I hate that line. That and, "And how does that make you feel?" How does it make me feel ? I can't close my ...

Matty! They're awesome!

* A/N: This was written for a competition in a very short period of time. It was not originally meant to be short but brevity was a requirement for the ...

I remember buying a book by them once... It was a lot like Chicken Soup for the Soul, only 10 times as depressing... I never made it through the whole ...

OK, I'm just gonna get down to business. I was in the way back of the shop, beyond piles of boxes and copy machines, which a lone light shining down ...

Wait! I also loved the tone of this chapter. Everything can't be all fun and games(not that is was before), this chapter brought some... je ne sais quoi to it. ...

Im here! Ok, so, Craig speaks spanish! I like how he takes responsibility for things and starts to get kind of protective of her. Forgive me if this is a ...

Granted. But then you become immortal and have to live a life of loneliness. :cry: I wish pigs could fly. 8)

Granted, but it runs away while you are asleep. I wish I had more time to write.

Lunch “And then I ran like hell to get to class. I probably looked like a complete idiot, as always.” I finally finished telling the group what had happened this ...

Sunday My life sucks! It’s official, no one has it worse than me. I saw Cross today. We were at Wal-Mart and I saw him in the men’s section. I ...

Very nice! I believe I've mentioned this before, but I like your choice in vocabulary. Also, this chapter was very descriptive. A nice balance of story telling and imagery. AND ...

OK! I finally got to finish it! This was really good! I espesially like the end of the chapter. I was genuinely surprised. Why did Amelia's car get trashed? I ...

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