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Let me start by saying that I was caught in by this little story from sentence one! Bravo! As for clarity, I sometimes had to read something twice because I ...

Ok! I read some of the reviews that people have posted, and verve is a word! It means to have a lot of enthusiasm, and to be lively. I think ...

Good poem, I like the mysterious, eerie feeling hidden in it. I think the last stanza had a big impact because of the extra line that was brief, and the ...

Regarding the little quirks of the writing, I.E. fragments, they're supposed to be there. I can't honestly say I'm sorry for putting them there, it's just how the character is. ...

Alright, well first off I find it a very interesting poem. However, I think it might've been a little easier to read if you had done stanza's. Also, words like ...

so this is a little adventure story about a girl named Ina. She is at a new school that she hates. Ina notices strange behavior, and the disciplinary ways are ...

uhm, so I was feeling a little contemplative, and got a jolt of a little something called inspiration mixed with confused insanity. I guess I decided that I'd try and ...

Although your poem is good in both expressional terms and emotional terms I thought the wording could be a bit stronger. With poetry I personally think that the best poems ...

I really liked how you transitioned from one line to another. Each had some relevance to the line before it which makes the poem flow a lot nicer.

This is NOT my first Percy and the Olympians, it's my 2nd. Maybe I'll put my first one up sometime, but anyway please enjoy! I knew I was a demigod. ...

Hi! So, as assumed i'm new here and hoping to make a good first impression Is it working yet? I'm sure this place is fantastic and can't wait to experience ...