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Ok, so I think it would've been nicer if there were definite stanza's, there were times where i would read the next line and have to stop because it didn't ...

Ok uhm....I don't know if I did this right, am i supposed to put up the second chapter in a different way? please tell me if I am, But here's ...

OMG! (can i even say that?) Buenvenidos! (did i spell that right?) ANYWAYSSS its great that you're writing again! on to your story It is a good START but it ...

OK, so this was really deep, and I think I get what you're trying to say, but on to some reviewing words which I consider fightin words.(ok, that was really ...

You're off to a really great start, but I'd like to suggest that you monitor the darkness to light ratio. Shadows vrs the actual object. Is this a digital camera ...

That was what EVERYone goes through, I loved it. I couldn't stop smiling come line one. Although it might've been either easier to read, or something of the sort if ...

The composition and lighting are a little off. You might want to experiment with that. I do like your perception and depth of view, but again you might want to ...

Title: Sweet Song Note the little bobbing head in the water.... yea she's calling the boy in the boat to his doom. What a sad fate. Please tell me what ...

Well I like to have a little recap before reading something. So here it is, and then we'll get onto the second chapter! Recap:. I don’t know how I got ...

I love all the colors and shapes of the picture. I had to scroll all around the screen to see them all but it was worth it! hahaha, brilliant work. ...

I have to say, the sunset was beautiful!! I do think that the Iris could have been from a better perspective, but the peach tree was very pretty. it had ...

I liked the devious sound to the poem, but there were some lines that didn't quite fit. I've never been good at grammar, and it aggravates me when people pin ...

First off, I'd like to thank all of you for reviewing. I know it's short! But does everything have to be long to be good or complete? I'll be honest ...

The pallid fields give no stricture. I can see through the veneer of soft haze deepening into the abyss. The wind softly whispers to the inert land waiting for the ...

well, I very much liked the theme behind the whole thing. Since you say it's a song, it kind of needs some Rhyme and Scheme, or some rhythm and meter. ...