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CHAPTER 2: Turing On the Flirt Everyone was sitting around a small campfire in the area that we called the living room. It was the main part of our warehouse ...

Luv it, luv it, luv it! This seriously sounds like its coming out of a book :D OK, so this time I found four mistakes in all. One where you ...

Two other guys followed Jesse around to make one side full of the circle. The rest of the hunting group followed me the other way to complete it. Another requirement ...

This was a good piece of writing, even though I saw a few grammar mistakes, I really liked it. You did a good job with not making some words sound ...

Thanks for your feedback. No i didn't take it too harsh AT ALL. It was all helpful information. Thanks again I really appreciate it :) And thanks Jessica, I will ...

Okay, so here is part 1 of chapter 1 of my young-adult novel, Blackout Forever. I know I need to work on some grammar and stuff, but feel free to ...

Again I LOVE it!! I'm so glad you continued. :D :D I did find one mistake, but I cant find it now.... :( (I think you left out a word ...

OH MY GOSH!!! That was amazing!! Even though I did find a few mistakes (spelling and grammar) I completely LOVED it! It had me smiling and you described the characters ...

This was seriously cool! I love things that are about supernatural beings but I'm getting tired of Vampires and werewolves. You definitely have something going and the work really makes ...

I think this could be a very good story when you continue it :) But remember not to leave us hanging with not telling the readers more about the main ...

I liked this very much and that probably has a big part with it being about wolves. Have you read the book "The Sight" By: David Clement-Davis???? If you like ...

I dragged my feet across the hot sand as I gazed out into the everlasting blanket of deep, blue water. The waves crashed against the shore and sent breezes of ...

Its a nice piece of work. Not my type of writing (meaning I could never come up with something like that) but I like it very, very much. Good job ...

It was dark, about 9:30, on a Wednesday night. My mom and I were driving home from a late movie and the radio was cranking high and loud. We were ...