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Thanks for your wonderful review! I'm very glad you enjoyed this, you have no idea how much this made my day! I have been working on this story for a ...

Chapter 1 A young man, somewhere in his early twenties, waited by the pier of some random docks looking nervous about something. Or perhaps anxious is a better word. He ...

Thanks for your critique :) I was beginning to think nobody cared xD I was trying to reference and satirise the BP oilspill incident with the Banks thing - hence ...

Two separate pieces- they're both tiny. I really like the concept for this one, but I feel like it could be a whole lot better. "Fledgling" Fledgling hopes must take ...

I cried. I was all alone again. I didn’t see anything from blackness that embraced me in its cold arms. My sob echoed along the invisible walls. I bit my ...

This is my first story that I've managed to finish I'm afraid :) I've a few more which are unfinished, which I want to try and finish soon though xD

The beginning confused me, but got me hooked. What does "castrating their felonies to make sure they're contained" and "releasing their enemies to keep them at bay" mean? Thanks a ...

Never wrote poetry before - so I don't really know how as such. I just wrote this out of the blue and I sort of liked it so I thought ...

This will be interesting to review I think - I'm an atheist so beware :P My Lord, may I be faithful with You now?

A review of: King Arthur: Dragon's Child by MK Hume If anyone is a fanatic of Arthurian legend like I am you will definitely like this - it's the tale ...

Entered for the Three Pronged Competition :) Hope you enjoy it and merry christmas :) Death is Warm It happened on Christmas Eve, a day usually meant for hope. But ...

Dear Lord that made my day :) First of all Merry Xmas :) Secondly this is a pretty well written piece. I like the use of sentence structure, actually I'm ...

Artful Creatures Prologue “Fuck!” The CEO swore, loud enough to make his secretary shift somewhat uncomfortably in the room beyond the glass door. She was meant to bring his attention ...

I'll review this when I can :) Should be done in a few hours :) EDIT:- Done. Very good I must say can't wait for more. I've included all my ...

Thanks to all for your time :) I've now finished chapter 11. Enjoy :)