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Re: Two Snakes
Pretty good. It really does leave an image in the readers brain. And that is really what you should be looking for :)
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Re: A fight for this world
Great work. I liked the theme, really :) About how the universe being so vast and trying to find our way through it, like a playground. I have no major ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Life
Well thanks for the advice, first of all. I will try to see if I can make it into something. It was mainly just an idea that came to my ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Life
Making Doctors Life has it’s own anatomy. Just like we do. We can go through life without discovering a tumor. A tumor which may have been the cause for our ...
Oct 18, 2010
