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Re: Papillion Prologue Part 2
It was great. I like that touch of romance. I keep forgetting the main character is only eight. She just sounds so mature. (: Really like this. Keep it up.
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Papillion Prologue Part 1 (redo-last one I promise)
This is great. You definitely captured my interest at the end of this. Can't wait to read more. (:
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: One Sweet Day (preface)
A preface... interesting. However, this doesn't seem to be a preface. I'm pulling from the wiki entry (just because it is easy and worded well): "A preface (pronounced "preffus") is ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: No title...yet (prologue)
This was definitely a great piece! I didn't really see anything wrong with it. Well I can't wait to read more! Keep doing what you're doing! :D
Feb 23, 2009