TearsLikeRain

Wow. That was absolutely amazing. I loved it. So Kata and her family are elves also? Or are they human? I got a little confused on that one. It doesn't ...

Wow. That was definitely intense. I was about to cry. I thought you killed Emily. ): That was mean, Valentime. :)I mean Valentine. You know she is one of my ...

Here is chapter 1. Please let me know what you think? :) Would greatly appreciate it. Thinking about changing the title to "The Fallen" it sounds better. If you haven't ...

It was great. I like that touch of romance. I keep forgetting the main character is only eight. She just sounds so mature. (: Really like this. Keep it up.

This is great. You definitely captured my interest at the end of this. Can't wait to read more. (:

So here is the prologue to one of my stories. It's my favorite story. I hope you enjoy it. Just let me know what needs improving please. PROLOGUE Death. The ...

A short story I wrote for language arts. It had to have some sort of lesson learned. Just wanted to share it. I know it has some cliches and is ...

A preface... interesting. However, this doesn't seem to be a preface. I'm pulling from the wiki entry (just because it is easy and worded well): "A preface (pronounced "preffus") is ...

Amazing. This story is so great. I already love Emily. She seems like so much fun and very outgoing. Please don't take her away. You should put some romance in ...

Just as I suspected, this story just keeps getting better.:) I love where you're taking it. Shouldn't the main character and Derek be a little more concerned about the mark ...

Great beginning, really love your pieces. I actually thought that the main character was a girl to, but I tend to do that with almost anything I read. Seems everyone ...

Wow! I'm really jealous. That was incredible, nothing in there to correct. I can't wait to read more. You're very talented. I absolutely love the way you describe things. I ...

Okay so I've fixed this up a bit. Let me know what you think? Chapter 1 will be coming soon. Preface It is dark and quiet. I sit alone in ...

Looks like all the mistakes were already pointed out to you, I didn't see anything more. So on with what I thought of the story!! It was great and I ...

Wow this was great! And I know I'm not the first to say this but, I was so absorbed that I didn't notice anything wrong with this piece, except that ...