Teardrop_on_the_fire

For me it was sort of strange, but I liked it very much. For a title...maybe something like "Playing Heart Strings", "Heart's Song", something like that(?)

Wow, dark and real on several levels, (I can hear Birthday Massacre singing it). I love it. In places it sort of hic-uped on me, but the flow is brought ...

The flow of it was a tad choppy for me, but I liked it very much as it went on because; one, I LOVE writing, two, I love creepy analogies ...

N/A

Ooh, very nice. The year that I was so looking forward to, mutated into a fight for my life and for the life of others around me, and I found ...

I love the first one with the icicles, I really wish I had an eye for angles like that. You really made the icicles seem like a striking border to ...

N/A

A fun new way to sing to the old German tune. I like how you took an already existing tune and changed the words to give the still same happy ...

Again, I'm going to cry. I only have praise for the song, I loved it and I could see her moaning next to an empty bottle, sad and depressed. It ...

I almost cried. A few typos: "Chorus: Bleu eyed boy I can't help but stare at you boy I dosen't seem fair " BLUE, not Bleu "You leave me falling ...

I loved the way you put both love and death, don't we all want one or the other? The way you ended it at first caught me, because you won't ...

I loved the way you put this, the narrator voice was so real and believible it was in my head and I felt as if I was the girl. It ...

Tell me if it was real enough

N/A.