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Re: Why?
Hi! First of all, what I saw in my head was a couple that have been friends since they were little, they have a baby, but the father is abusive. ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Allegra Prologue/Chp. 1
Thanks, and no it's not to harsh! Also, incase you were wondering why there's woods in New York, since New York usually is like thought of as a big city, ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: YWS Flyer: The Jag Edition
That's so cool and creative! I want that poster, just sayin' ^_^
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Edge of Insanity
I liked this a lot! I think you definatly have a talent for writing lyrics. I thought the song could have had more flow to it, sometimes you can get ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Hey, I'm Vyper.
Welcome to YWS! I'm Teardrop!! Sounds like you'll fit in just fine here! I love "Dark" Fantasy XD I can't wait to read what you have or will be posting!! ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Hello, privet!
Hi! Welcome to YWS! I'm Teardrop! If you haven't already you should check out storybooks, they're really fun to participate in. :smt003 I'm sure you'll fit in perfectly here! I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Well Hello There :)
Hi Jazz! Welcome to YWS! I'm Teardrop! But a lot of people call me Tear, or you can call me Kenzie, or whatever you want! :smt003 I love literature and ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Cruel Eyes Ch-2
Hey, Teardrop here! First of all, you should check this article out about punctuation within dialogue. "Your not. You are dead." He said as if reading my mind. I stared ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Dream Walker Chapter One
Hey, Teardrop here to review this chapter! Okay, so yeah this is super short! XD I suggest trying not to use a lot of fragments like the few below: I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Four
First of all, I thought this was very well written! I like your style of writing, and I enjoyed reading! I love the different variety of words as well! Their ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Confession Is Good For The Soul ( Final Part)
Hi! Teardrop here! First of all, I didn't think the oversized text was nessesary, but oh well. Anyway, I think you could have added more detail, and more raw emotion ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Teardrop's Reviews ( Accepting )
GrenadeCatcher- Thanks! Same here! Also guys, I haven't been checking this in a while, I'm sorry guys. I completely forgot. But I promise I'll finish any requests right away! I've ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Through the Eyes of a Werewolf- Ch.4
Hey, Teardrop here! I froze and gulped, the blood in my face disappeared and I felt a little light-headed. I thought you could have reworded this part to something like ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Behind Closed Doors and Inside Loud Houses.
This was really nicely done. I think a lot of people can relate to it, and I love the long stanzas. Probobly one of my favorite YWS poems, partly because ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Atlas
Thanks guys! Appreciate the reviews! Love, Teardrop
May 1, 2011