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Re: Letters To Cody - 1
Hi! I like this, I think it has loads of potential! It seemed like you used the word "it" a lot. Instead of using "it", tell us what "it" is! ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Chasing Time [1]
Chapter One: The Mission ( Mason ) September 17, 2063 A trickle of sweat dripped from Mason's brow, tasting salty against his tongue. What the hell does the president want ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Hatched Chapter One
Hi! First of all, I realized a completely common problem; show and not tell. As Skins said. : D Anyway, I would try and tell us a little bit about ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Ghosts in Hunting
Hi! First of all, this was very difficult to read because of the way it's spaced. You should space this out more so it's easier to read. Also, when there ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi everybody. So, yeah, I'm new here! ; )
Oct 11, 2010