Teardrop

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Hi! I'm Teardrop. First of all, I really like this so far. I think you have an awesome plot going on, keep it up. "Closeing" from the title does not ...

Hi! I liked this a lot. It was really sweet and dreamy, it made me forget all the bad things life had to offer for just a second. It's so ...

Thanks, and yeah i've never heard of a fan fiction poem either. : D

Okay, this is pretty much a Percy Jackson And The Olympians: The Titan's Curse Fanfiction poem that I posted because I was bored. I'm not good at poetry, but I ...

I like it so far. I can see improvments from the previous version. I think the little prologue thingy is still quite short though, but it does help explain a ...

I'm going to post the next chapter next week or sometime in November... probobly. I have it written it just needs edited.

Okay, sorry. : D Thanks for the review! I'll work on being more descriptive.

Hi! Teardrop here! Corrections are in bold, comments are in red. His beautiful green eyes Bore into my soul “I don’t want to fight anymore” That’s what he says to ...

Hi! This is really cool, it looks like the cover! Anyway, I thought that the shoulders could have been detailed- on the cover they stick out quite a bit, and ...

Awesome, thanks!

Thanks, and yeah I know it's short. I'm working on extending it!

Thanks, and yeah Haymitch is their mentor.

Hi! This is a Hunger Games fan fiction, this is based on Haymitch Albernathy's Hunger Games victory in the Second Quarter Quell. It's not really good, reviews are appreciated! Thanks! ...

Okay! Thanks, and no it didn't sound harsh- just honest. : ) Sorry, but the spell check isn't on it sometimes when I post. : O Or maybe I'm going ...