Teardrop

Hey! Teardrop here to review! -First of all, you need to space this out. It's all jumbled together, and it's hard to read. - You need to check your capitilization ...

Hi, I'm Teardrop! First of all, when you start dialogue, it becomes it's own paragraph, so when one of your characters speaks be sure to remember that and make some ...

Hi! I'm Teardrop, and i shall review this today. : ) Comments in red. ( I also highlighted mistakes in red ) Running. It was all I could think about. ...

Hey! Teardrop here on request! I'm gonna try and give you a useful review here but I didn't catch anything really big sooo here it goes! Try and avoid those ...

I'll join!!

Hey! Teardrop here to review! First of all, I think this is a really cool idea and I hope to read more. But this could use a little work no ...

This is epicness. I was laughing so freaking hard! Whenever I wanna laugh now or need something to make me happy I read this and it totally makes my day. ...

Thanks to both of you, I'll try and edit this soon. :)

Hey! I started this a while ago, and decided I might as well post this in hope of some reviews so it isn't so crappy. Anyway, I hope you like ...

These days I can't seem to pick just a few, I like a lot of different bands. Like almost 100 if I could name all the bands I like. I ...

Finished! : D

Hey, Teardrop here to review this! Oh and welcome to YWS! ( Although I'm a bit late ) Now, first of all I suggest spacing this out a bit more. ...

Hey! Teardrop here to review! : ) First of all, I liked this very much. Starting another novel eh? You're brave. : ) Anyway, I hope you continue this because ...

Finished! By the way, the first link didn't work. : )

Hey! Teardrop here! I'm no real great at reviewing poems but I'll give it a shot. :D This is a special type of format for a poem. If you want ...